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DMC Comic - LUCIFER 01 by nevachen DMC Comic - LUCIFER 01 by nevachen
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I'm very thank :iconnoiroux: and :iconboradis:

My English very poor. If those words were wrong. Please tell me.

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Nero From Devil may cry
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:iconboradis:
boradis Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2011
I'm American and English is my native language (I'm also a professional writer). Here are some options for the last bubble:

Simple:
"I know you're in here. Come on out."

Joking/confrontating:
"This is stupid. I know you're in here."

Explaining Devilbringer power:
"I can sense demonic energies you know."
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boradis Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2011
I can also correct my own spelling:

Joking/confronting:
"This is stupid. I know you're in here."
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nevachen Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ohhhhhhhhhh~ Thanks a lotttttttt~~
That all sounds good. And I trust your select~~
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StarinaSparda Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I love your work...it's nice to see you making a comic....good luck and I can't wait to read more
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nevachen Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Very very thank you.:dance:
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noiroux Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2011  Student Artist
I love your art~ <3 I'm glad to see you're making a comic.

I think for the last bubble you meant to put "I know you're still home. Come out. Now."
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nevachen Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
THANK YOU~~~~~~~~~
You help me. Really really Thanks
I have modify :dance:
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:iconnoiroux:
noiroux Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2011  Student Artist
You're welcome~ x3

What is your first language anyway~? :3
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nevachen Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
My first language is Chinese~
I come from Taiwan~ :XD:
Nice to meet you~
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noiroux Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2011  Student Artist
Nice to meet you too~
If you'd like I can help you with your english in your comic? = u =
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